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When I die
Will you sing for me?
When I die
Will you cry?

When I die
Will you send flowers to my grave?
When I die
Will you be brave?

When I die
Will you still love me?
When I die
Will you let me be?

When I die
Will you throw away the ring?
When I die
Will you walk over the land like a king?

When I die
I will always be with you
By your side
And sing to you all day long.
Please tell me what you think :)

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Leonaa1 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
That's beautiful
it's so emotional
I love it !!!
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ShadAlex1011 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is so amazing I love it!
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IncorrectBird Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
How to describe... let me try: Awesome, amazing and a little bit of wonderful feelings, no, not a little bit, full of it... beautiful.. :O

Inc.
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much :) You are very kind!
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IncorrectBird Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
welcome :D
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hydrogen-hydroxide Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is really pretty. And sad. Mostly sad. It's very beautiful, though.
Is she dying? She sounds like she is, like she's very sure she'll be dead soon.

Bluh, this reminds me of two characters of mine. ;; They aren't married, because she has cancer and won't let him marry a dying woman. So "Will you throw away the ring" sounds terribly sad from my point of view.

Ah, you're going to make me cry again! D:
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you.
I prefer leaving my viewers with what they interpret the poem as. Plus no one is wrong :) It is very interesting what you have deduced from it.

Wow your characters do sound like they are in a very sad situation.
D:
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hydrogen-hydroxide Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, point taken.


They aaare. I feel like an awful person, even though they're fictional, but there's no other way it can go. I'm going to be crying while I write...!
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm sure it is going to end up as a brilliant story :)
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hydrogen-hydroxide Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I just have to get around to really writing first, of course, but...
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm sure you will do well :D
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DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
o my gosh i almost cried reading this....well will they do these things if we die T.T
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I think they love you very much. Especially the person who married you as it shows that they want to be with you forever :3 I think that whoever you truly love will show their deepest sorrows when you die. But you have a whole life ahead of you! :D You can create amazing memories and you do not need to think about death for a while :) I hope you have a good life.
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DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thank u very much i really appretiate it haha im actually a lil sad cause valentines is coming and ill be lonely *sigh* i really want to find that speacial someone fast cause i really need one :)
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student General Artist
You are very welcome.
Don't be sad! Be strong because even though you might be lonely you can still do whatever you want! Also if there is a person who does like you, they may not show it on Valentines, they may show it a different way since Valentine's day can be a bit pressuring for the guys :p
I'm sure you will find that special person soon! :)
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DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
hehe im pretty wierd and the guys at my enviorment aren't what u woulf call "gentlemen" hehe so i doubt it a lil but thank u for ur kind words
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha do not worry I am very weird too. I have the same problem in my area but don't worry. If it has to be this year or the next I am sure it would be worth the wait :)
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DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lets hope so :)
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww. Who are 'they'? People who love you in general? O.o
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DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
kinda like the person who married me or something or were in love with me and i loved them back
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waubbafet17 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:( this was so sad
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks
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RosieLuvsSonadow Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is what I want to sing to my love life when I die... It's so touching... -Sniff-
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm glad you liked it. :3
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RosieLuvsSonadow Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome! Oh, this deserves a round of applause! :iconclapplz:
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:)
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wtfImunconscious Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheeeplz:...
No really, it's really good!
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha thanks! :D
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Youichiz2011 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Touching! :icontearplz:
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks xD
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trixief98 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Very nice an the subject is of which most of us think about at some point very good an well writen
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much. :)
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AL11-scarlettt Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful :D <3
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks <3
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks <3
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AL11-scarlettt Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
np ^^
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks <3
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The-Kunoichi Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! you did a wonderful job. :)
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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SasukeIshMyne Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
;^; That was pretty.
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks! :D
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SasukeIshMyne Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
You're welcome. :)
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Demoncat101 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
This is simply Beautiful :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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Demoncat101 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Whalecome :iconnarwhalplz:
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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Demoncat101 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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master-chief2064 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Kind of a drama bomb bit I love it :D
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks :)
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