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When I die
Will you sing for me?
When I die
Will you cry?

When I die
Will you send flowers to my grave?
When I die
Will you be brave?

When I die
Will you still love me?
When I die
Will you let me be?

When I die
Will you throw away the ring?
When I die
Will you walk over the land like a king?

When I die
I will always be with you
By your side
And sing to you all day long.
Please tell me what you think :)

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Leonaa1 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
That's beautiful
it's so emotional
I love it !!!
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ShadAlex1011 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is so amazing I love it!
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IncorrectBird Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
How to describe... let me try: Awesome, amazing and a little bit of wonderful feelings, no, not a little bit, full of it... beautiful.. :O

Inc.
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much :) You are very kind!
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IncorrectBird Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
welcome :D
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hydrogen-hydroxide Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is really pretty. And sad. Mostly sad. It's very beautiful, though.
Is she dying? She sounds like she is, like she's very sure she'll be dead soon.

Bluh, this reminds me of two characters of mine. ;; They aren't married, because she has cancer and won't let him marry a dying woman. So "Will you throw away the ring" sounds terribly sad from my point of view.

Ah, you're going to make me cry again! D:
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you.
I prefer leaving my viewers with what they interpret the poem as. Plus no one is wrong :) It is very interesting what you have deduced from it.

Wow your characters do sound like they are in a very sad situation.
D:
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hydrogen-hydroxide Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, point taken.


They aaare. I feel like an awful person, even though they're fictional, but there's no other way it can go. I'm going to be crying while I write...!
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White-Angel-1 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm sure it is going to end up as a brilliant story :)
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hydrogen-hydroxide Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I just have to get around to really writing first, of course, but...
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