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Is she dying? She sounds like she is, like she's very sure she'll be dead soon.
Bluh, this reminds me of two characters of mine. ;; They aren't married, because she has cancer and won't let him marry a dying woman. So "Will you throw away the ring" sounds terribly sad from my point of view.
Ah, you're going to make me cry again! D:
I prefer leaving my viewers with what they interpret the poem as. Plus no one is wrong
Wow your characters do sound like they are in a very sad situation.
D:
They aaare. I feel like an awful person, even though they're fictional, but there's no other way it can go. I'm going to be crying while I write...!